北京市2021届高考英语二轮温习专题精讲 第17讲 书面表达一1（上）(1)

题一：

假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Nick 将于八月来四川旅行，特来信询问有关旅行景点情形。请依照下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。 旅行资源 许多世界闻名的风光名胜，如： 九寨沟（海子；清澈见底；色彩斑斓）

都江堰水利工程（2，000多年历史；仍在发挥作用） 相关信息 气候适宜，交通方便 注意：

1. 词数100左右，信的格式及开头以为你写好（不记入总词数）。 2. 可依照内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考辞汇：省份—province 海子—lake 都江堰水利工程—Dujiangyan Irrigation Project Dear Nick,

I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Sichuan in August.___________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题二：

假设你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情形。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括表中的内容： 自然情形 位于长江边、风光优美、适合居住

成就 经济发展迅速，新建了不少工厂、住房、道路 存在问题 水、空气污染，交通拥挤 对江城发展的看法 (内容由考生自己拟定) 注意：

回信中不能利用“江城”之外的地名。

2. 词数120左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 3. 参考辞汇:经济economy 题三：

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack将要来中国游览黄鹤楼，请依照下面的提示给Jack写一封信介绍有关黄鹤楼的情形。 提示如下：

黄鹤楼位于湖北省武汉市，高54.1米；始建于1600连年前，在1981-1985年间曾 重修，起初用于战争，此刻对公众开放；曾有很多诗人登楼望远，写下了优秀诗篇；吸引众多中外游客，取得很高评判。 题四：

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Alice将要来中国游览你的家乡青岛，请依照下面的提示给Alice写一封信介绍有青岛的情形。 提示如下：

1. 位于山东省东部。

2. 以蓝色的大海，漂亮的海边而闻名，是避暑胜地。

3. 每一年夏天来自全国各地成千上万的人们到那个地址沿海漫步、游泳、购物、观赏秀丽景色。 4. 最近几年来城市发生庞大转变，对进展我国对外贸易起重要作用，成为国际口岸城市。 题五：

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Alice将要来中国游览你的家乡安徽，请给Alice写一封信介绍有安徽的情形。

题六：

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Alice将要来中国游览杭州的西湖，请给Alice写一封信介绍有西湖的情形。 题七：

假设你是李华，是北京师范大学的学生， 明年夏天即将毕业。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下自己的大体情形。要点如下： 1. 年龄23；

2. 喜爱上网，爱学习，对英语最感爱好，口语超级流畅。

3. 性格爽朗，自信，喜爱与人交往，有较强的组织能力和团队协作精神； 4. 喜爱教师那个职业，希望能成为一名人民教师，实现自己的妄图。 注意：词数100左右； 参考辞汇：专业major 题八：

请依照下面的表格提示用英语写一篇短文介绍一下姚明。词数：100左右 出生日期 身高 体重 最喜欢的食品 最喜欢的颜色 出生地 座右铭 个人经历 2.26米 134公斤 肉 蓝色 上海 相信自己 1997：进入上海篮球队 1998：入选国家队 2000：入选亚洲全明星队 2002：加盟休斯顿火箭队（Houston Rockets） 2007：于叶莉结婚 题九：

World Youth (monthly) 有一“人物”专栏，刊登各国青年人物的图片。你校校友王小平的照片被采纳。请依照以下资料写一段说明，以便随图发表。（100词左右） 姓名 国籍 出生年月 职业 简历 王小平 中国 1966年2月 计算机高级工程师 1984年7月毕业于西安四中，同年进入西安交通大学学习。19年起在西安的一家计算机公司工作。 主要事迹 1、93年获计算机博士学位； 2、一家美国公司欲高薪聘用，但被他拒绝； 3、1998年因特殊贡献获金奖。 题十：

姓名 安在旭（Ahn Jae Wook） 性别 男 国籍 韩国（South Korean） 简历 1994年，毕业于汉城艺术大学(Seoul Arts University) 1994年， 在电视剧“Song of Blind Bird” 中扮演了韩国的第一位盲人医生Kang Young Woo 1997年， 出版了第一张专楫“Forever” 2000年， 出版了一张“Forever”的中文版(Chinese Version) 年龄 职业 29 歌手、演员 2001年4月22日， 在中华世纪坛(the China Millennium Monument)为支持北京申奥(Beijing Olympic Bid)与中国歌手同台演出。 2001年5月18日，在北京的音乐会演中加入韩国 N.G.R演唱组演出。今年他已经计划到中国的其它的城市演出。 备注 一位深受中国青少年喜爱的歌手 注意：

1. 100—120 2. 用文段形式做人物介绍 第17讲 书面表达一经典精讲(上) 题一： Dear Nick,

I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Sichuan in August. You’ve made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.

Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors’ imagination. Another attraction is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trop more enjoyable. I’m sure you’ll have a good time.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

点评：本文要点齐全、语法正确；本文利用了一些好的句式、定语从句和过渡词，提高的文章的档次。

题二： Dear Bob,

It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.

In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.

Yours, Xiao Hua

点评：本文要点齐全、语法正确；本文利用了一些好的句式、宾语从句、出色的短语和过渡词，提高的文章的档次。 题三： Dear Jack,

I’m glad that you will come to China to visit the Yellow Crane Tower. Let me introduce it to you. The Yellow Crane Tower is one of the well-known places of interest in China.

It lies in Wuhan, Hubei Province, and is about 51.t meters high. It was built more than 1,600 years ago and rebuilt from 1981 to 1985 by the government. At the beginning, it was only used for wars, but now it is open to the public.

If you climb up the tower, you’ll see a beautiful view. Many famous poets wrote good poems about it. In fact, the scenery around the tower is really a model. As a result, it has attracted lots of tourists from

home and abroad, most of whom think highly of Yellow Crane Tower.

In construction, it’s one of the best man-made projects in China. Why not come here to enjoy yourself as soon as possible?

Looking forward to seeing you very soon.

Yours, Li Hua

点评：本文简练明快地介绍了黄鹤楼，层次清楚，用词适当；复合句的适当运用给文章增添了几分生动。 题四： Dear Alice,

I’m glad that you will come to China to visit my hometown Qingdao . Let me introduce it to you. The city of Qingdao is in the east of Shangdong Province. It is famous for the blue sea and beautiful beaches. It is a wonderful place for summer holidays. Tens of thousands of people from all parts of the country visit Qingdao every summer. They walk along the beach, go swimming or do some shopping. They can see fine view of the city.

Great changes have taken place in Qingdao in the recent years. It has played an important part in the development of the foreign trade of our country. It has become an international port city Looking forward to seeing you very soon.

Yours, Li Hua

点评：本文简练明了地介绍了青岛那个海边城市；本文利用了一些出色的短语，提高的文章的档次。 题五：

Our Province Anhui Province is located in the southeast of China. It is an area rich in natural resources. Mount Huangshan is the most beautiful sight in China as well as in the world. The weather in Anhui is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer. Anhui is famous for its tea and wine. Its capital city

Hefei is a city of Hi-tech. There are more than ten universities in Hefei. The college graduates make up a strong force of labour. The USTC (University of Science and Technology of China) sends hundreds of students to study in the USA each year. An American professor interprets USTC as the United States ‘Training Center, Isn’t it interesting?

点评：本文第一介绍了安徽省的位置，然后抓住了安徽省的一些鲜明特点：如有全国闻名的旅行胜地黄山、驰誉中国的茶叶和酒和闻名的中国科技大学等一一进行了描述，使读者在短时刻内取得了大量的信息。 题六：

The City I Like Best

I have been to several other cities . Hangzhou is the one that I like best.

Hangzhou is a beautiful city. The West Lake with mountains all around is the prettiest part. It takes on a different look with the change of seasons. In spring, the path around the lake is lined with green trees and pink peach flowers. It fills me with strength and energy. In summer, sitting by the quiet and peaceful lake with green lotus leaves and white or pink lotus flowers everywhere helps me to forget all my worries. When I step on the golden leaves in autumn, it gives me a feeling of good harvest. In winter, the trees and paths covered with white snow bring me a pure and noble feeling. The whole city is just like a big garden. No wonder it’s compared to the paradise on the earth. In addition , there are many places of interest worth visiting.

Therefore, I like Hangzhou better than any other city. 点评：

1. 这是一篇描述西湖的短文。西湖文明于世。作者抓住杭州的西湖这一要紧景点，通过对春、夏、秋、冬西湖多变的景色的详尽描述，为读者展现了一副人世仙境，唤起了读者心中对西湖的赞扬。 2. 为了增强文章的表达力，作者多处利用了复杂句式。如：

① When I step on the golden leaves in autumn, it gives me a feeling of good harvest.（含有when引导的时刻状语从句的复合句）

② Hangzhou is the one that I like best.（含有that引导的定语从句）

③ The West Lake with mountains all around is the prettiest part. (含有with复合结构作定语)

3. 利用非谓语动词：In winter, the trees and paths covered with white snow bring me a pure and noble feeling.（含有过去分词作定语）；sitting by the quiet and peaceful lake with green lotus leaves and white or pink lotus flowers everywhere helps me to forget all my worry. (含有动名词作主语)

4. 利用了一些高级短语：take on（呈现）; be lined with（两边排列着）; step on采在……上; a feeling of一种的……感觉; be covered with（被……覆盖着；of interest（有趣的），etc. 5. 为了使上下文连接紧密而利用了过度词：in addition, therefore, etc. 题七：

I, a 23-yea-old student, studying in Beijing Normal University, will graduate next summer.

I have wide and various interests, of which surfing the Internet is my favorite. I think it’s fun to study my lessons. My major is English, and I have great interest in it. So I’m always doing well in English exams. Besides, my oral English is quite fluent. What’s more, as an outgoing and confident person, I love to communicate with others, so I’m easy to get along with. Therefore, I have developed good organizational skills as well as team spirit.

What is most important for me is that I like teaching very much, which is the most glorious under the sun. I’m looking forward to becoming a teacher to realize my childhood dream.

点评：本文思路清楚、结构合理。作者在介绍时，多处利用了复合句，这就增加了文章的表达力同时也表现的作者深厚的语言功底；另外，为了使下文衔接紧密，作者还利用了besides, therefore, what’ s more等过渡词语。 题八：

Yao Ming, who is now 2.26meters tall and 134 kg in weight, was born in Shanghai on September 12, 1980. It is said that he likes meat best and his favorite color is blue. His motto is that one must believe in oneself.

He joined Shanghai basketball team in 1997and became a member of China national team in 1998. Two years later he was chosen as a member of Asian All-star basketball team. In 2002, He was selected into the Houston Rockets in the NBA draft. And on August 6,2007, he got married to Ye Li, a beautiful Chinese girl.

He is a top player both in China and all over the world.

点评：本文简练明了地介绍了中国闻名篮球运动员姚明；本文利用了一些好的句式、出色的辞汇短语，提高的文章的档次。 题九：

This is Wang Xiaoping, a senior engineer of a famous computer company in China. He was given a gold medal in 1998 for having played an important part in scientific research.

He was born in China in February, 1966. Having graduated from Xi’an Jiaotong University. Nine years later, he received a doctor’s degree of computer, and then he went to work in a computer company in Xi’an. Once an American company tried to invite him to work in America and promised him a high salary. But he didn’t accept the invitation. Now he still works hard for his motherland.

点评：本文详细地介绍了王小平的学习经历和要紧事迹；本文利用了一些出色的短语、此刻分词和并列句，提高的文章的档次。 题十：

Ahn Jae Wook, a handsome young man of 29, is a South Korean singer and actor.

He graduated from Seou Arts University in 1994. He played Kang Young Woo, the first Korean blind doctor in the TV drama “Song of Blind Bird” in the same year. His first album was released in 1997, followed by the Chinese version of the album in 2000. In order to support Beijing Olympic Bid, he performed with Chinese singers at the China Millennium Monument on April 22, 2001. And he joined the Korean singing group N.G.R in a concert in Beijing on May 18. He has planned to tour other

Chinese cities late this year.

Ahn Jae Wook is very popular with Chinese teenagers.

点评：本文简练明了介绍了安在旭的学习经历和取得的成绩；本文利用了一些出色的短语和过去分词作状语，提高的文章的档次。